I figured out that Bailey can have outrageous, artistic clothes and ways of expressing herself without being identical to Riah. Riah is feisty, whereas Bailey is... artistic and wild on the outside, but quiet on the inside. I think that's the route I'm going to go. I was trying too hard to have two quiet characters, because I didn't want to duplicate Riah. Well, I think Bailey will be like Riah, just... in a quieter sort of way. She's kind of complicated to describe. Complicated, but quiet. Wild, but weary of the world and its ways. She's got a very extroverted exterior, but a quiet interior, that not many people see that side of her. I think she looks wild, but she isn't. And that's gonna be awesome to write.
I FINALLY FIGURED HER OUT. happy days are here again.
Showing posts with label Bailey. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Bailey. Show all posts
Saturday, April 21, 2012
Introducing Me {Bailey}
Sunday, March 18, 2012
The Sound of Waves
The sound of waves meets my ears as sand squishes between my toes. I dump a pile of sticks down in front of Ryan. "There. That should do it."
"Thanks." He barely glances at me as he whips out his lighter.
"Well, that's convenient." I fall to the ground next to him and sit Indian-style. "What's for dinner?"
"Why are you asking me?"
"Because you're our leader. Duh."
"Sawyer has food in his backpack. Ask him."
I send Sawyer a questioning glance.
"In answer to your question, beef jerky," he says crisply. "And we'd better give Luca a big enough portion. A growing puppy needs his nutrients."
"You lied, Sawyer." Bailey huffs, zipping up her hoodie. "I'm still not charmed."
"How could you not be won over by those puppy dog eyes?"
"I don't know, but I'm still not convinced."
"Come on, Bails. He's not that bad."
"Whatever."
I grin at the two siblings, keeping my opinion to myself. I personally find Luca quite adorable, but certain members of our party do not agree -- specifically Ryan and Bailey. I don't know what they have against fluffy golden retriever puppys. I personally think Ryan's just too grumpy to care, and I'm not really sure what Bailey's problem is, but I'm betting it's just PMS. Or a temporary case of insanity. Either way, she and Ryan are both crazy to not adore Luca.
The smell of smoke tints the air, and I pull my jacket closer around me. It's cold out here on the beach. I guess my mental picture of soaking up the sun and the sand and the waves was in error.
I can't help but laugh as Sawyer stuffs the plaid jacket around Luca, primping and preening to make sure his dog is comfortable.
He shoots me a look over his shoulder. "What?"
I smirk. "You know what, you old softie."
He shakes his head. "Despite what you think, I really am quite logical. I'm not just fluff. In fact, I am a man of science."
"Show me."
"What's the square root of a cubed number?"
"Itself," Ryan says after poking the fire with a stick to flare the embers.
I roll my eyes. "Oh, please, this is elementary."
"Don't underestimate Sawyer." Bailey raises her eyebrows. "Sawyer's brilliance far surpasses any mere mortal man."
"Really." I pop a peanut into my mouth, not impressed.
"You dare to question my intelligence?" Sawyer then launches into a stream of scientifical terms that boggle my mind and render me speechless.
"See? Like I said. Brilliant." Bailey grins.
I shake my head. "Fine. I underestimated you, Sawyer, and for that, I am sorry."
"Hmph. Don't let it happen again." But if I'm not mistaken, he has a twinkle in his eye and the hint of a smile.
"We need to pitch the tent." Ryan is all business, and I've learned my lesson about arguing with him. So we spend the next fifteen minutes setting up our campsite.
After this, I feel the need to walk to the edge of the shore and look out at the horizon as the sky turns a crisp cerulean blue. I hug myself in an effort to keep warm and let the waves lap at my toes while I consider the vast wide ocean. It's mindboggling, really.
A tickle across the top of my foot draws my attention to a small hermit crab scuttling across my feet. I scoop it up before it can escape and hold it in my hands, careful to avoid his pincers. I head back to the campsite.
"Look what I found."
"Aww, it's so cute!" Bailey runs to my side and cups her hand around my own, letting the crab run into her grasp.
"Isn't it?"
"Oh, Luca's going to have a hey day," Sawyer quips, rising to his feet. Only Ryan seems uninterested, which really isn't a big surprise. He's been moody ever since we left Emasis, and it's really starting to annoy. I want to just slap a big smile on his face and be done with it. It's not like I'm happy to be away from home, either, but do I look like I'm sulking? Not yet.
Labels:
Avary,
Bailey,
characters,
golden retriever,
Ryan,
Sawyer
Friday, March 16, 2012
This is uncanny.
I feel like I need an entire post dedicated to this.
I've known for a while now that a golden retriever is in the story. I don't know why. He just is. So I was browsing tumblr and this picture caught my eye because of the puppy.
Then I realized.
That is Avary's green backpack. And Sawyer's plaid/flannel shirt.
I'd been browsing Pinterest a while back and found this image, which reminded me of Avary a lot. And here it is again, in this picture.
Not only that, but I also found this picture on Tumblr and decided that the Crew has to camp on the beach. It's like these two pictures were meant to go together. See the guy in the plaid? It's Sawyer.
Like I said: uncanny.
I have been really weirded out by how this novel is falling into place. Seriously.
Not only that, but I was telling Mom about how it looked like this image was taken straight from my head, and Dad overheard.
Me: "And Sawyer wears plaid."
Dad: "Uh-huh!"
Me: "Red plaid."
Dad: "Yes."
He said it like it was a fact he'd known all his life. I was kind of weirded out wondering how he knew that. Then I mentioned Avary having a green backpack, and he said he thought of green when he heard Avary too.
The weird part is, I know this novel. I know these characters. I don't know how, I just do. Their stories are already in my head. They're just waiting to get out.
Don't ask me how I know that Avary has a green backpack or Sawyer wears plaid. I just do. It's in my blood.
I think I'm realizing more and more lately that it's the story I was meant to write.
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