I figured out that Bailey can have outrageous, artistic clothes and ways of expressing herself without being identical to Riah. Riah is feisty, whereas Bailey is... artistic and wild on the outside, but quiet on the inside. I think that's the route I'm going to go. I was trying too hard to have two quiet characters, because I didn't want to duplicate Riah. Well, I think Bailey will be like Riah, just... in a quieter sort of way. She's kind of complicated to describe. Complicated, but quiet. Wild, but weary of the world and its ways. She's got a very extroverted exterior, but a quiet interior, that not many people see that side of her. I think she looks wild, but she isn't. And that's gonna be awesome to write.
I FINALLY FIGURED HER OUT. happy days are here again.
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Saturday, April 21, 2012
Introducing Me {Bailey}
Sunday, April 8, 2012
The Darkest Moment In Time Starts Now
Once they figure out that Ryan is losing himself, they set to work putting a book together of his memories. Avary, Bailey, and Sawyer all help with this. It becomes a leather book and they bring it with them everywhere so that they can verify his souvenirs.
Close to the end, they return to the desertous planet where Ebenezer is, only they return on the same day Ebenezer dies. Ryan doesn’t remember the planet at all, but when he sees Ebenezer, it strikes a chord. The old man is killed by Gesparo due to a problem involved with smuggling. They hide out somehow, and Ryan freaks out because he remembers Ebenezer. He watches him die. Soon after that, Ryan passes out. They drag him back to Emasis and he falls into a coma.
Close to the end, they return to the desertous planet where Ebenezer is, only they return on the same day Ebenezer dies. Ryan doesn’t remember the planet at all, but when he sees Ebenezer, it strikes a chord. The old man is killed by Gesparo due to a problem involved with smuggling. They hide out somehow, and Ryan freaks out because he remembers Ebenezer. He watches him die. Soon after that, Ryan passes out. They drag him back to Emasis and he falls into a coma.
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Wednesday, April 4, 2012
To J-Hutch, or Not To J-Hutch
Sunday, March 18, 2012
Notes, Again
I can't help but laugh as Sawyer stuffs the plaid jacket around Luca.
He shoots me a look over his shoulder as he primps and preens to make sure his dog is comfortable. "What?"
I smirk. "You know what, you old softie."
Souvenirs: Because the Crew travels all around the world and through time! Brilliance! They should pick up things along the way.
Write the beach scene, or some of it. It'll help.
They end up playing, splashing around in the water -- "which proves to me that we're just four big kids trying to save the universe."
He shoots me a look over his shoulder as he primps and preens to make sure his dog is comfortable. "What?"
I smirk. "You know what, you old softie."
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Souvenirs: Because the Crew travels all around the world and through time! Brilliance! They should pick up things along the way.
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Write the beach scene, or some of it. It'll help.
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They end up playing, splashing around in the water -- "which proves to me that we're just four big kids trying to save the universe."
Saturday, March 17, 2012
Notes of a Tired Dreamer
Avary's catalyst? --
Waterfall scenes: Maybe first time in the time warp bubble? Maybe they need to put a tracker on Gesparo, and that's part of the setback?
Dr. Flan's wife: Brilliant evil genius?
Dr. Flan: GEORGE CLOONEY? ♥♥♥
Clark: Harrison Ford, Kurt Russell
Ryan and Avary meet a la Boy with the Bread? Nah, too HG-ish.
Potential dog names: Luca, Luqa
Luqa: He's just sort of Sawyer's dog. The end.
Her desktop lamp wouldn't light unless she screwed the bulb in all the way. It was kind of how Avary felt about her life.
How did she grow up to be a bitter girl? Yet wonderstruck?
LISTEN TO COLOR.
LISTEN TO RILEY.
“Can you stop running?”
“Can you stop running long enough to let me go?”
Waterfall scenes: Maybe first time in the time warp bubble? Maybe they need to put a tracker on Gesparo, and that's part of the setback?
Dr. Flan's wife: Brilliant evil genius?
Dr. Flan: GEORGE CLOONEY? ♥♥♥
Clark: Harrison Ford, Kurt Russell
Ryan and Avary meet a la Boy with the Bread? Nah, too HG-ish.
Potential dog names: Luca, Luqa
Luqa: He's just sort of Sawyer's dog. The end.
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