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Saturday, April 21, 2012

Introducing Me {Bailey}

I figured out that Bailey can have outrageous, artistic clothes and ways of expressing herself without being identical to Riah. Riah is feisty, whereas Bailey is... artistic and wild on the outside, but quiet on the inside. I think that's the route I'm going to go. I was trying too hard to have two quiet characters, because I didn't want to duplicate Riah. Well, I think Bailey will be like Riah, just... in a quieter sort of way. She's kind of complicated to describe. Complicated, but quiet. Wild, but weary of the world and its ways. She's got a very extroverted exterior, but a quiet interior, that not many people see that side of her. I think she looks wild, but she isn't. And that's gonna be awesome to write.

I FINALLY FIGURED HER OUT. happy days are here again.

Sunday, April 8, 2012

The Darkest Moment In Time Starts Now

Once they figure out that Ryan is losing himself, they set to work putting a book together of his memories. Avary, Bailey, and Sawyer all help with this. It becomes a leather book and they bring it with them everywhere so that they can verify his souvenirs.

Close to the end, they return to the desertous planet where Ebenezer is, only they return on the same day Ebenezer dies. Ryan doesn’t remember the planet at all, but when he sees Ebenezer, it strikes a chord. The old man is killed by Gesparo due to a problem involved with smuggling. They hide out somehow, and Ryan freaks out because he remembers Ebenezer. He watches him die. Soon after that, Ryan passes out. They drag him back to Emasis and he falls into a coma.